Hey!


    The Intermission and the Intro Ark are in their final state. I will most likely never change them again.


    TLDR: The Fiction is Rewritten up to the Action Ark. The Hiatus stays until I have enough votes in my Poll in the chapter "Plotline: Beginning of Plot, the Narrator, and 2nd Ark plan for Joanna and Rufus- POLL FOR WHAT NEXT?</a>" or I choose what to do next. If you won''t, then go do something better with your life or just read a better fiction.


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    The changes: reordering the presentation of the plot to be more chronological, adding a little more information, explain more, change some titles, taking out grammar and repetition mistakes, and taking out my author''s notes.


    I added indicators of changes in POV between the parentheses ( ).


    I also edited the Description severely. I am sorry for being so misleading and incomprehensible for so long. I kind of forgot about it because I was focusing on the story. That said, I think the story''s still a bit convoluted. But I guess it will stay that way.


    That''s why I need a direction for this Fiction to go in. The first poll I had, I think only two people voted. I definitely need more to decide what to do next.


    Have a good life,


    PettyOfficer